pursuasive writing

 Dear Mum

can I have a pool because it is summer in three months.

My second reason why I should get a pool it will be hot!. The fresh air would do nothing it would not be could enough.

We should get a pool so we don,t hafe to spend money on going to the pools in town.And spend money on warter proof nappies.

My last reason so we don,t hafe to drive in the hot car all the way to the beach.

I hope you under stand from Casanita